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I think the advantages of mobile phones outweight the disadvantages of mobile phones. Because the disadvantages of mobile phones come from our usages. If we use them wisely we will not have the disadvantages of mobile phones. The advantages of mobile phones are so much. Let's start with the time saving apps. Mobile phones come with a lot of apps and you can download extra apps too. There are apps like notebook, callender, change office ( it shows the current exchange rate) etc. With the notebook app you can store your notes. With the callender app you can arrange your meetings and time schedules. With the change office app you can see the current exchange rate and rearrange  your payments. The second app type is the extra apps. You can download the companie's or school's mobile app (if they have one) you can do your job from everywhere and there are a lot of extra apps can be used for storing data. Mobile apps sometimes come with cloud storage apps. Cloud storage can save youy from filling up the storage capasity. With these apps mobile phones become better then computers. To summerize the text, mobile phones' advantages outweights the disadvantages because of the apps inside it.

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  1. etymologist30 Eylül 2018 13:07

    "I think the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones." Please correct the mistake here. The composition is excellent. Congratulations!

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